Thursday, December 13, 2007

Emails are specialist subjects

Trying to write an email to send to prospects whi have never heard of you. I tried and my mentor tore it up :( and said that as a specialist email writer he would do it for me.
Mine, I am told, was to impersonnal with nothing to get the reader excited enough to connect with the offer and take the next step.
Now that is great in that it saves me loads of time and frustration but do I learn from that??? Well we will have to wait and see if I can understand why his is better than mine.

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